hey!, me ha encantado la vn, al menos hasta donde va me ha dejado picado y no puedo esperar a leer mas, tambien me ha gustado mucho la musica, hay alguna forma en la que pueda seguir escuchando la muscia?, como un canal de yt o un soundcloud?, enserio me ha dejado encantado
Hey! Your game is awesome! I love it! Can me and the ExGames team start translating the game into TL, so if you want, i can give you the translation files so you can integrate it into the game officially? Thank you and your team for such a great game! I hope that you will continue to develop the game in the same spirit! You guys are awesome! :3
Well I just finished reading it and I have to say I absolutely love it, the plot keeps getting more and more interesting and the characters got a lot of personality (I'm already in love with AL-933) I'm so looking forward to the next update
La verdad mi experiencia con la VN podría ser resumida en esta imagen
(Quien entendió, entendió xd)
But know talking more in deep, i think this one is really a good one, the history is intriguing to the point were you question everything and everyone, which is why it pick my interest, the thing of how each person make their theories of what or who bring them here, also as how we are doing it (atleast for now)
the style is also a very good point, the style is so full of life and unique, and the little animation it have when it change of sprite is very cool, it give a very good effect, the background also is good, i mean sometimes is simple but it do is job of telling were are we, but can go very far when is needed, which i really love it
about the music i say is god, it do the perfect job to give the feel that need to the scene, i more specifically talk about the one in the hallway in that kind of anphitheater, it really put me a little scare (more because the mc custion if 933 even exist...) but some that bothers me a bit is the sound when the character talk, i mean is very good to know how is the voice of a character, but sometimes i think it sound very loud, so maybe turn it down a bit?, or make a option for it (but maybe that already exist and i'm making a foul of myself...)
so in summary, i like the idea this VN is taking, it so full of possibilities that just make me want to know more, but we will have to wait for that, which i be looking for with a lot of enthusiasm
(también algo que quería resaltar, es que esto fuera hecho por un grupo latino, mas específicamente tres personas, es simplemente sorpréndete y me alegra ver eso, desde Colombia les digo, excelente trabajo :3)
Muchísimas gracias por tu crítica, ¡de verdad que estos comentarios nos motivan a continuar con todos los ánimos! Sep, esa era la intención con la historia, me alegra que haya logrado transmitir lo que queríamos. ¡Esperamos verte para la siguiente actualización!
La voz de los personajes puede bajarse en options > Volumen > la barra de sonido, esta no afecta la música, solo sonidos concretos que no entorpecen la lectura; como cuando el prota toma la espada. Así que si las voces se te hacen muy ruidosas puedes bajarle el sonido.
This VN looks so good! The character art style is amazing, the music is such a vibe, the lore is very intriguing and of course big guy is just so lovable💕 I really can't wait for the next update!
(Copied from my review of the VN. Apologies if you've already read this)
An intriguing start. The premise has a lot of mystery and the art is really nice. However, what really brings this VN down is the sheer repetitiveness of the writing. For example, there are so many conversations about the characters not remembering aspects of their past lives that I began to dread reading yet another instance of the phrase "I can't remember" or some variant thereof. A few times is fine, but you used it so many times that it deadens the impact. You should definitely consider cutting back on such repetition.
I kinda see why you see that as a problem, but… that actually was the desired intention. But don’t worry as the story progress the descriptions will be shorter and the spotlight will be on characters’ dialog.
i rarely comment on itch (this is my first time actually) but 933 somewhat reminds me of Amicus from Adastra. idk whether that was intended or just a small reference.
either way, this game looks promising, can't wait for the next update!
Me ha encantado de lejos! La calidad de imágenes y detalles en el texto estoy seguro que van a hacer resaltar muchísimo esta vs, la amciedad de saber como continuará!!
PD: La parte de "I wonder how, i wonder why" era una referencia a la canción fools garden? porque es lo único que escuche al leerlo xD
Whoa. This is really promising and so polished. I love everything about this already, and Danganronpa aspect of it (even the UI, like the transition) is really good. I'm just waiting for the next updates already!
P.S, if we followed Danganronpa formula then i think i have an idea of who will be the first victim (if there is one) lol
This is such a polished and brilliant first build! You have packed so much intrigue, mystery, and character into everyone already; it's super impressive! I'm greatly enjoying the danganronpa vibes and colored text you've added in, it really gets everything feeling like a grand puzzle. For what it's worth I don't think I saw any typos either, the writing is brilliant not to mention well-expressive for not being in your mother tongue. I can't wait to see where this project is headed.
Y me alegra leer una obra maestra así creada por equipo latino, no tenga tanta prisa en completar la próxima actualización, la calidad ya es evidente :)
¡Muchas gracias, amigo! La siguiente actualización está en proceso, estamos haciendo los fondos, sprites y demás. ¡También estamos pensando en sacar el juego en español!
Given the start... the irrationality is perfectly rational! Bizarre to even say! @..@... Lion is nice :/3 but very strange... good to have some image of MC... now where to find a mirror... % = Progress???, hrm... Initials and a number? Its really funny how this is to be a linear VN, yet messages as if from choices pop up! XD Really love the high definition pixel art! and the half bit tunes, what a blend! I am also assuming the prologue is only half done, curious to meet he others!
You know, when I saw like 3 new VNs randomly pop up in my itch.io notifications, I didn't expect 2/3 to be such high quality! (and I didn't even read the last one yet)
Story hooked me, the sprites are amazing. Maybe found 2 typos in total.
Maybe I'd only ask for a toggle for the speech DUM DUM DUM sound effects lol. Also yes please on a discord or something. I don't want to spoil half the vn fanbase by talking about the plot in random discords.
Glad you like it! The speech sounds effect can be change with the sound volume bar hehe. And we don’t have a discord yet, but if we make one in the future we’ll share the link here in this page!
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I wonder if the ingame music is available somewhere, it's very soothing ng
We’ll consider that for the future!
for now,it seems like just 933,no bad though,l like the big guy
嘿，有中文翻译吗？我需要它。
hey!, me ha encantado la vn, al menos hasta donde va me ha dejado picado y no puedo esperar a leer mas, tambien me ha gustado mucho la musica, hay alguna forma en la que pueda seguir escuchando la muscia?, como un canal de yt o un soundcloud?, enserio me ha dejado encantado
Hey! Your game is awesome! I love it! Can me and the ExGames team start translating the game into TL, so if you want, i can give you the translation files so you can integrate it into the game officially? Thank you and your team for such a great game! I hope that you will continue to develop the game in the same spirit! You guys are awesome! :3
Just played this and like it. You might want to consider setting up a patreon page.
Yoooooo ✨✨✨
Well I just finished reading it and I have to say I absolutely love it, the plot keeps getting more and more interesting and the characters got a lot of personality (I'm already in love with AL-933) I'm so looking forward to the next update
Great job! Keep it up!
I usually don't play games that are just released recently or at least made progress half way. That is to not ruin the experience.
Seeing how polished the descriptions look on this, and the pre artwork on this site. I am interested, and will be anticipating.
I'm not supposed to ask this but
Does this game have explicit content??
Pardon me from what i have said
Just answer my question
Not yet, but it will!
La verdad mi experiencia con la VN podría ser resumida en esta imagen
(Quien entendió, entendió xd)
But know talking more in deep, i think this one is really a good one, the history is intriguing to the point were you question everything and everyone, which is why it pick my interest, the thing of how each person make their theories of what or who bring them here, also as how we are doing it (atleast for now)
the style is also a very good point, the style is so full of life and unique, and the little animation it have when it change of sprite is very cool, it give a very good effect, the background also is good, i mean sometimes is simple but it do is job of telling were are we, but can go very far when is needed, which i really love it
about the music i say is god, it do the perfect job to give the feel that need to the scene, i more specifically talk about the one in the hallway in that kind of anphitheater, it really put me a little scare (more because the mc custion if 933 even exist...) but some that bothers me a bit is the sound when the character talk, i mean is very good to know how is the voice of a character, but sometimes i think it sound very loud, so maybe turn it down a bit?, or make a option for it (but maybe that already exist and i'm making a foul of myself...)
so in summary, i like the idea this VN is taking, it so full of possibilities that just make me want to know more, but we will have to wait for that, which i be looking for with a lot of enthusiasm
(también algo que quería resaltar, es que esto fuera hecho por un grupo latino, mas específicamente tres personas, es simplemente sorpréndete y me alegra ver eso, desde Colombia les digo, excelente trabajo :3)
Muchísimas gracias por tu crítica, ¡de verdad que estos comentarios nos motivan a continuar con todos los ánimos! Sep, esa era la intención con la historia, me alegra que haya logrado transmitir lo que queríamos. ¡Esperamos verte para la siguiente actualización!
La voz de los personajes puede bajarse en options > Volumen > la barra de sonido, esta no afecta la música, solo sonidos concretos que no entorpecen la lectura; como cuando el prota toma la espada. Así que si las voces se te hacen muy ruidosas puedes bajarle el sonido.
Y con permiso me voy a robar tu meme. :P
This VN looks so good! The character art style is amazing, the music is such a vibe, the lore is very intriguing and of course big guy is just so lovable💕 I really can't wait for the next update!
(Copied from my review of the VN. Apologies if you've already read this)
An intriguing start. The premise has a lot of mystery and the art is really nice. However, what really brings this VN down is the sheer repetitiveness of the writing. For example, there are so many conversations about the characters not remembering aspects of their past lives that I began to dread reading yet another instance of the phrase "I can't remember" or some variant thereof. A few times is fine, but you used it so many times that it deadens the impact. You should definitely consider cutting back on such repetition.
I kinda see why you see that as a problem, but… that actually was the desired intention. But don’t worry as the story progress the descriptions will be shorter and the spotlight will be on characters’ dialog.
When update 😭😭😭😭
Probably in a month or two, working on it!
My dumbass been reading the title as 'Our Shared "Life" instead of "Lie".... Bye💀😭
The Life was a Lie! XD
i rarely comment on itch (this is my first time actually) but 933 somewhat reminds me of Amicus from Adastra. idk whether that was intended or just a small reference.
either way, this game looks promising, can't wait for the next update!
Its all gay?
Mostly~
always has been
Me ha encantado de lejos! La calidad de imágenes y detalles en el texto estoy seguro que van a hacer resaltar muchísimo esta vs, la amciedad de saber como continuará!!
PD: La parte de "I wonder how, i wonder why" era una referencia a la canción fools garden? porque es lo único que escuche al leerlo xD
¡Al fin alguien lo entiende! No en serio, lo es. Estaba escuchando esa canción cuando escribía el primer borrador xD
Whoa. This is really promising and so polished. I love everything about this already, and Danganronpa aspect of it (even the UI, like the transition) is really good. I'm just waiting for the next updates already!
P.S, if we followed Danganronpa formula then i think i have an idea of who will be the first victim (if there is one) lol
Why does the lion remind me of nagito..
honestly i get mix of nagito and sayaka from him lol
just thinking about making a translation as fanwork
wondering if L Team mind :D
We’re already planning a spanish translation, but we don’t have any problem if you wanna translate the game :D
THXXX, please wait for our good news with Chinese translation 🥳
This is such a polished and brilliant first build! You have packed so much intrigue, mystery, and character into everyone already; it's super impressive! I'm greatly enjoying the danganronpa vibes and colored text you've added in, it really gets everything feeling like a grand puzzle. For what it's worth I don't think I saw any typos either, the writing is brilliant not to mention well-expressive for not being in your mother tongue. I can't wait to see where this project is headed.
Y me alegra leer una obra maestra así creada por equipo latino, no tenga tanta prisa en completar la próxima actualización, la calidad ya es evidente :)
¡Muchas gracias, amigo! La siguiente actualización está en proceso, estamos haciendo los fondos, sprites y demás. ¡También estamos pensando en sacar el juego en español!
Omg this VN is so beautiful! hope to see more updates!
Given the start... the irrationality is perfectly rational! Bizarre to even say! @..@... Lion is nice :/3 but very strange... good to have some image of MC... now where to find a mirror... % = Progress???, hrm... Initials and a number? Its really funny how this is to be a linear VN, yet messages as if from choices pop up! XD Really love the high definition pixel art! and the half bit tunes, what a blend! I am also assuming the prologue is only half done, curious to meet he others!
The messages mean something for the future :) In the next update there are gonna be more choices, promise!
Oh and before I forget, and if I forgot, does MC have a dialogue sound yet like the other two? If not, perhaps should, if yes, just ignore this.
You know, when I saw like 3 new VNs randomly pop up in my itch.io notifications, I didn't expect 2/3 to be such high quality! (and I didn't even read the last one yet)
Story hooked me, the sprites are amazing. Maybe found 2 typos in total.
Maybe I'd only ask for a toggle for the speech DUM DUM DUM sound effects lol. Also yes please on a discord or something. I don't want to spoil half the vn fanbase by talking about the plot in random discords.
Glad you like it! The speech sounds effect can be change with the sound volume bar hehe. And we don’t have a discord yet, but if we make one in the future we’ll share the link here in this page!
Honestly I don't know why, but I'm getting serious Danganronpa vibes when I play this!
Do you have a Discord server? I also want to say this VN is great and can't wait for more! Danganronpa vibes = mastermind
Not yet, but probably we’ll make one in the future. If that’s the case we’ll share the link here in this page :D
This has patreon?
Not yet. Still debating if we should make one.
If you do I will consider being a patreon :)
I haven't played this vn for long, maybe 30 minutes or so, but it's really giving me Danganronpa vibes.
From the font to the way some words / phrases / sentences get highlighted in yellow, I'm really enjoying it so far!
Guilty in charge! I love the Danganronpa series, so yeah the aesthetic is inspired by it.
Good choice, in my opinion!
Saw it yyesterday. Ooooh, interesting
amazing! can't wait for future updates!
I'm a big fan of your text effect!
ooho this is amazing, the characters are cool and bring a good story so far it makes me amazed can't wait for the continuation, keep going dude.
Wow! i Like The Looks of This Game! Hope your game does well! and good luck!
Cute style, the game looks promising