idk but this feels like a HUGE danganropa scenario where we accepcted to take part in this experiment were we are all forced to loose our memorys and wake up in a place where we have no memory of
I am in love with how this is going already, and I cannot wait to see more if the time comes!
Even if there are some errors; the writing is just wonderful! Yes, some words were used wrong, but that’s expected, especially when most people whose mother tongue is english make those same mistakes, if not more frequently. It’s absolutely incredible how everything is structured, give yourselves a pat in the back for this, truly.
I am more than happy to wait as long as it takes for an update on this visual novel, and hoping that any remaining struggles you are fighting soon vanish.
933 is the finest dude ever by the way thank you for creating such godsend… okay byebye
Are their names meaningful?I guess V for Vulpes and PT for Panthera tigris.But I don't know what's the meaning of OR AL LC.They don't exactly match their scientific names, so the pattern I'm looking for is probably incorrect.But I like the game. I'm just curious about the meaning of their names.
We are glad to know that you liked it. We know we’re ghosting a bit right now due to personal matters we need to resolve, but rest assured that we’re still working on this, so please be patient.
This is the kind of VN in early development stage that, since there is only a few lore elements showed, i can't help but create hundreds and hundreds of various theories on how it all fits together.
I have never been so bored in my whole life. You can cut out 90% of what there is and not lose a thing from the story.... I've never been so bored. EVER
That can happen with a lot of visual novels lol 😅, it just depends on your attention span. The game is still in an introduction stage where we meet other characters so there is still plenty of time for the story of the game to unfold and get interesting. We just have to be patient and wait until we’re a couple of more builds in and then the potential of the games story becomes a lot more apparant to us :)
i found some grammar errors that you can fix in the beginning when the character says "but i do not do it." it would be better to say "but i don't." and when the thig on the top left pops up that says "you should avoid hurt your snout in the future" you should change it to "you should avoid hurting your snout in the future" and when the lion says "with this sudden situation we were suddenly put into" you should change it to "with this situation that we were suddenly put into" and at the very beginning when it says something about sand and gravel pressing in your back it would be better to say "Sand and gravel? they press into my back and stick to my skin like they want to pull me back into the ground" and a lot of other sentences are redundant and sometimes it seems like you try too hard to be poetic and it becomes a little bit confusing
- when the mc looks over the cliff you should put "why can't i... remember anything?" basically switch the cant and i.
- change "why im here!?" to "why am i here!?" (at the cliff scene)
- "making my skin slips from his touch" doesnt really make sence to me
Thank you for the hard work! I have a few questions though, will there be next part/chapter and if yes when will it come out? I hope we dont have to wait long because i really liked the vn. Also in my opinion it would be cool if the end of the game has more than one endings. For example if we have to choose between 2 or more options and the choice we make to lead us to the one of the endings. Its just my opinion of course.
Salve! Thank you for your comment and interest in our project! We assure you that there will indeed be a next part, as we are currently in the prologue phase. However, we have encountered a setback as our artist is currently unable to create the sprites and CGs necessary for the upcoming update. We kindly ask for your patience as we work through this hurdle.
And rest assured, the story will include different routes, and each route will have a minimum of 2 unique endings. Thank you again for your understanding and support.
Me gustó mucho, creo que es momento de obsesionarme y pensar en headcanons y en cosas que podrían pasar en la historia mientras voy en el transporte publico.
This is one of my favorite VNs, and I'm excited to see version 0.2 released (manifested in excitement to roll in bed XD).
After February, I was worried that you guys wouldn't finish it smoothly, after all,I've been waiting for a while since last year :(
Although I don't know what difficulties you guys have encountered (maybe? I guessed from the summary at the end of the article. If not, I apologize for my speculation)
But I really want to congratulate you for successfully completing the second part.
Some thoughts on this update: Although I guessed at the beginning that the abnormal freezing phenomenon might be caused by the bear, the direction of the rest of the plot was still unexpected.That's nice.I thought he had super power, after all, Wolfy had a similar situation in the hallway before。
To be honest, the image of 933 is so wonderful, if I had such a friend, my life would be better hhh
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I wish you all the best in your next endeavors, and I'll be patient with. XD
English is also not my mother tongue, and besides, my English is not very well.
Both the reading of VN and the completion of this review were mostly made possible with the help of machine translation.
So my understanding of VN and what this comment is trying to express may not be done well.
I deeply apologize for any misunderstanding and syntax error that this comment may have caused.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the release of 0.2, and I’m glad to hear that it’s one of your favorites! I understand your concerns about the project’s progress, especially since you’ve been waiting patiently since last year. While I can’t give all the details about the difficulties we are facing, it’s an achievement for us release the second part.
I’m glad that the plot direction was unexpected for you. It’s always exciting when a storyline can keep us on our toes.
No worries about your English skills not being perfect! We are far from perfect in this language too! And your comment was still very clear and understandable.
Thank you for your patience and support, and I hope you continue to enjoy the VN and look forward to the next chapter!
This is my first time commenting asking for more. I usually wait for updates patiently, but this time I just can't. The prologue was so good! I need more of this story (and more of the cute, silly lion) as soon as possible!
Seriously, I can't wait for the next update. I can feel this is going to be one of my favorites visual novels once it is complete.
Probably to the end of this month! We know we’ve been quiet for a while. Currently, we’re taking all the feedback we’ve been given and editing the demo along with the next update. So please be patient with us!
The art, the background, and especially, the music are all very well made, i can see you put a lot of effort into it. The universe is also interesting, there are so many mysteries, how did they get there ? Why ? Was the tiger right ?
I'm seeing that the last update is from 54 days ago, it doesn't mean anything, but please, don't give up on the project. You setted up such a great universe, with those endearing characters, it would be a shame to let that down.
The english used in the VN is not a problem. I could easily read it, without any misunderstanding.
Thank you for creating such an amazing universe, i'll look forward for futur update ! :D
There will be multiple routes, but the decisions will only define which route you will choose at a certain point in the story. once there there will only be specific decisions that affect the end.
I'M BACK! omg, I have to thank the luck gods for putting this vn on my timeline, it's do good!
Even though the character have no memory they still radiate their personality! Also, any concrete and logical though I had was immediately overwritten by how cute and adorable AL looks... And have to say, our MC does need some therapy, because I can feel his amygdala putting him in fly or fight response all the time... Like who hurt him? (Well probably the same person(?s?) That torn his jaw... Or the ones that wiped their memory (or both, who knows?!) . Same with PT (that I just forgot the code...) But with him I actually felt his corned and frightened response, I was really impressed with 933 analysis too, but he is the smart one, both emotionally and logically... He should really apologize less, though.
And now, let's put on our tin foil hats, because theory time! (I know it's the prologue... But still, I have thought that I want to share with the class)
The letters of the code, that did hit me into my trivia corner of my brain [ /╲/\╭(•‿•)╮/\╱\ ] so I did a little digging just to be sure and here are my (really new and early conclusions) isn't the scientific name for Wolf Cannis Lupus That would fit the letters for our two wolves LC, just out of order.... And the same fits for the tiger, Panthera Tigris... And for the one that almost ended the MC, V for Vulpes something (the rest depends on the species) ... As for our adorable Lion well, there the thing AL doesn't match for Panthera Leo...BUT! As I found out, there is the cave lion, aka Panthera Leo Atrox, that could match the letters in reverse order.... So yeah, I'm excited to see if my little theory will make any sense...
So, after this mountain of text, I wanted to say that I'm loving this work, I'm really excited to see this story as it progresses, and that I will be here, cheering.
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Man this game is incredible!! The details, the style, the soundtracks.. everything is awesome!! You guys are doing very well!
I'm guessing that all the characters have different super powers maybe
idk but this feels like a HUGE danganropa scenario where we accepcted to take part in this experiment
were we are all forced to loose our memorys and wake up in a place where we have no memory of
I am in love with how this is going already, and I cannot wait to see more if the time comes!
Even if there are some errors; the writing is just wonderful! Yes, some words were used wrong, but that’s expected, especially when most people whose mother tongue is english make those same mistakes, if not more frequently. It’s absolutely incredible how everything is structured, give yourselves a pat in the back for this, truly.
I am more than happy to wait as long as it takes for an update on this visual novel, and hoping that any remaining struggles you are fighting soon vanish.
933 is the finest dude ever by the way thank you for creating such godsend… okay byebye
Are there any nsfw?
Are their names meaningful?I guess V for Vulpes and PT for Panthera tigris.But I don't know what's the meaning of OR AL LC.They don't exactly match their scientific names, so the pattern I'm looking for is probably incorrect.But I like the game. I'm just curious about the meaning of their names.
HOW DO YOU MAKE THIS HOLY FUCK THE ART THE STORY EVEN TH EFUCKN UI ITS TOO GOOD HOW
We are glad to know that you liked it. We know we’re ghosting a bit right now due to personal matters we need to resolve, but rest assured that we’re still working on this, so please be patient.
bruh, the waiting time is going to kill from the inside ;(
I don't know why but this VN really makes me want to wait for the sequel because frankly it's heavy from the start :)
This is the kind of VN in early development stage that, since there is only a few lore elements showed, i can't help but create hundreds and hundreds of various theories on how it all fits together.
I have never been so bored in my whole life. You can cut out 90% of what there is and not lose a thing from the story.... I've never been so bored. EVER
That can happen with a lot of visual novels lol 😅, it just depends on your attention span. The game is still in an introduction stage where we meet other characters so there is still plenty of time for the story of the game to unfold and get interesting. We just have to be patient and wait until we’re a couple of more builds in and then the potential of the games story becomes a lot more apparant to us :)
i found some grammar errors that you can fix in the beginning when the character says "but i do not do it." it would be better to say "but i don't." and when the thig on the top left pops up that says "you should avoid hurt your snout in the future" you should change it to "you should avoid hurting your snout in the future" and when the lion says "with this sudden situation we were suddenly put into" you should change it to "with this situation that we were suddenly put into" and at the very beginning when it says something about sand and gravel pressing in your back it would be better to say "Sand and gravel? they press into my back and stick to my skin like they want to pull me back into the ground" and a lot of other sentences are redundant and sometimes it seems like you try too hard to be poetic and it becomes a little bit confusing
- when the mc looks over the cliff you should put "why can't i... remember anything?" basically switch the cant and i.
- change "why im here!?" to "why am i here!?" (at the cliff scene)
- "making my skin slips from his touch" doesnt really make sence to me
BTW ill put more errors if i find anymore
Actually is the next update going to be the last one? Or its still far from and end
This is just the beginning. Once we have completed most of the sprites and backgrounds, the updates will be released at a faster pace.
Thank you for the hard work! I have a few questions though, will there be next part/chapter and if yes when will it come out? I hope we dont have to wait long because i really liked the vn. Also in my opinion it would be cool if the end of the game has more than one endings. For example if we have to choose between 2 or more options and the choice we make to lead us to the one of the endings. Its just my opinion of course.
Salve! Thank you for your comment and interest in our project! We assure you that there will indeed be a next part, as we are currently in the prologue phase. However, we have encountered a setback as our artist is currently unable to create the sprites and CGs necessary for the upcoming update. We kindly ask for your patience as we work through this hurdle.
And rest assured, the story will include different routes, and each route will have a minimum of 2 unique endings. Thank you again for your understanding and support.
Me gustó mucho, creo que es momento de obsesionarme y pensar en headcanons y en cosas que podrían pasar en la historia mientras voy en el transporte publico.
¿Por qué siento que 933 de la nada va a comenzar a hablarme de tener esperanza y mucha buena suerte?
Y aún no has conocido a LC-768 :P
Buena referencia Danganronpa jajaja también lo pensé
I have a question, i play it on android but it keeps crashing. How do I fix this?
try give it notify permission?
it may be too early into development to ask this but I’m just curious if there will be routes for certain characters in the game?
There will be!
This is one of my favorite VNs, and I'm excited to see version 0.2 released (manifested in excitement to roll in bed XD).
After February, I was worried that you guys wouldn't finish it smoothly, after all,I've been waiting for a while since last year :(
Although I don't know what difficulties you guys have encountered (maybe? I guessed from the summary at the end of the article. If not, I apologize for my speculation)
But I really want to congratulate you for successfully completing the second part.
Some thoughts on this update: Although I guessed at the beginning that the abnormal freezing phenomenon might be caused by the bear, the direction of the rest of the plot was still unexpected.That's nice.I thought he had super power, after all, Wolfy had a similar situation in the hallway before。
To be honest, the image of 933 is so wonderful, if I had such a friend, my life would be better hhh
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I wish you all the best in your next endeavors, and I'll be patient with. XD
English is also not my mother tongue, and besides, my English is not very well.
Both the reading of VN and the completion of this review were mostly made possible with the help of machine translation.
So my understanding of VN and what this comment is trying to express may not be done well.
I deeply apologize for any misunderstanding and syntax error that this comment may have caused.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the release of 0.2, and I’m glad to hear that it’s one of your favorites! I understand your concerns about the project’s progress, especially since you’ve been waiting patiently since last year. While I can’t give all the details about the difficulties we are facing, it’s an achievement for us release the second part.
I’m glad that the plot direction was unexpected for you. It’s always exciting when a storyline can keep us on our toes.
No worries about your English skills not being perfect! We are far from perfect in this language too! And your comment was still very clear and understandable.
Thank you for your patience and support, and I hope you continue to enjoy the VN and look forward to the next chapter!
^ω^
This is my first time commenting asking for more. I usually wait for updates patiently, but this time I just can't. The prologue was so good! I need more of this story (and more of the cute, silly lion) as soon as possible!
Seriously, I can't wait for the next update. I can feel this is going to be one of my favorites visual novels once it is complete.
hey there!
I've loved the novel so far! It feels fresh and fantastic
Although I have a question, I loved the OST of this novel and I wanted to see if there is a place to download it from
Hello there, I'm translating this fvn into Chinese and met some problem about the title translation. so I'm here asking for help.
can you text me
xxxxxxxin twetter orxxxxxxxin Discord🙏🏻. thx a lotthankyou for the update 🙏
Yessssss new update :3!
BRO REALLY PUT DANGANRONPA REFRENCE AT THE BEGINNING 😭😭😭
wait ...
Did he knows? ~
Ngl missed it when i played the first update but yeah lol
(lowkey that plus a few other things makes me think this is gonna end up as some kind of death game o.o)
Nice vn my favorite part was the lion :)
arghh words can't express how sad I was when I finished the prologue, this is too good for me to wait
will it be possible for nsfw material (mainly the sex) to be turned off or blurred once game is complete?
It will!
how many bits is the visual novel
any info on the release date of a new update?
Probably to the end of this month! We know we’ve been quiet for a while. Currently, we’re taking all the feedback we’ve been given and editing the demo along with the next update. So please be patient with us!
Okay, thankyou for letting me know. Hope all goes well!
Ngl this game gives me some Danganronpa 2 vibes
When is the next update
Well, this sure is an interesting VN.
The art, the background, and especially, the music are all very well made, i can see you put a lot of effort into it. The universe is also interesting, there are so many mysteries, how did they get there ? Why ? Was the tiger right ?
I'm seeing that the last update is from 54 days ago, it doesn't mean anything, but please, don't give up on the project. You setted up such a great universe, with those endearing characters, it would be a shame to let that down.
The english used in the VN is not a problem. I could easily read it, without any misunderstanding.
Thank you for creating such an amazing universe, i'll look forward for futur update ! :D
I played the game
I liked it
I'm still confused
Also please use more easier words😅😅😅
And I hope to see more
define... kinetic.. in this context lol
There will be multiple routes, but the decisions will only define which route you will choose at a certain point in the story. once there there will only be specific decisions that affect the end.
So… semi-kinect? Think of it as EchoVN
Very promising first build. Excited for more updates!
Oh this looks really interesting, I will be back with more comments after I finish the 1st build.
I'M BACK! omg, I have to thank the luck gods for putting this vn on my timeline, it's do good!
Even though the character have no memory they still radiate their personality! Also, any concrete and logical though I had was immediately overwritten by how cute and adorable AL looks... And have to say, our MC does need some therapy, because I can feel his amygdala putting him in fly or fight response all the time... Like who hurt him? (Well probably the same person(?s?) That torn his jaw... Or the ones that wiped their memory (or both, who knows?!) . Same with PT (that I just forgot the code...) But with him I actually felt his corned and frightened response, I was really impressed with 933 analysis too, but he is the smart one, both emotionally and logically... He should really apologize less, though.
And now, let's put on our tin foil hats, because theory time! (I know it's the prologue... But still, I have thought that I want to share with the class)
The letters of the code, that did hit me into my trivia corner of my brain [ /╲/\╭(•‿•)╮/\╱\ ] so I did a little digging just to be sure and here are my (really new and early conclusions) isn't the scientific name for Wolf Cannis Lupus That would fit the letters for our two wolves LC, just out of order.... And the same fits for the tiger, Panthera Tigris... And for the one that almost ended the MC, V for Vulpes something (the rest depends on the species) ... As for our adorable Lion well, there the thing AL doesn't match for Panthera Leo...BUT! As I found out, there is the cave lion, aka Panthera Leo Atrox, that could match the letters in reverse order.... So yeah, I'm excited to see if my little theory will make any sense...
So, after this mountain of text, I wanted to say that I'm loving this work, I'm really excited to see this story as it progresses, and that I will be here, cheering.
See ya.