idk but this feels like a HUGE danganropa scenario where we accepcted to take part in this experiment were we are all forced to loose our memorys and wake up in a place where we have no memory of
I am in love with how this is going already, and I cannot wait to see more if the time comes!
Even if there are some errors; the writing is just wonderful! Yes, some words were used wrong, but that’s expected, especially when most people whose mother tongue is english make those same mistakes, if not more frequently. It’s absolutely incredible how everything is structured, give yourselves a pat in the back for this, truly.
I am more than happy to wait as long as it takes for an update on this visual novel, and hoping that any remaining struggles you are fighting soon vanish.
933 is the finest dude ever by the way thank you for creating such godsend… okay byebye
Are their names meaningful?I guess V for Vulpes and PT for Panthera tigris.But I don't know what's the meaning of OR AL LC.They don't exactly match their scientific names, so the pattern I'm looking for is probably incorrect.But I like the game. I'm just curious about the meaning of their names.
We are glad to know that you liked it. We know we’re ghosting a bit right now due to personal matters we need to resolve, but rest assured that we’re still working on this, so please be patient.
This is the kind of VN in early development stage that, since there is only a few lore elements showed, i can't help but create hundreds and hundreds of various theories on how it all fits together.
I have never been so bored in my whole life. You can cut out 90% of what there is and not lose a thing from the story.... I've never been so bored. EVER
That can happen with a lot of visual novels lol 😅, it just depends on your attention span. The game is still in an introduction stage where we meet other characters so there is still plenty of time for the story of the game to unfold and get interesting. We just have to be patient and wait until we’re a couple of more builds in and then the potential of the games story becomes a lot more apparant to us :)
i found some grammar errors that you can fix in the beginning when the character says "but i do not do it." it would be better to say "but i don't." and when the thig on the top left pops up that says "you should avoid hurt your snout in the future" you should change it to "you should avoid hurting your snout in the future" and when the lion says "with this sudden situation we were suddenly put into" you should change it to "with this situation that we were suddenly put into" and at the very beginning when it says something about sand and gravel pressing in your back it would be better to say "Sand and gravel? they press into my back and stick to my skin like they want to pull me back into the ground" and a lot of other sentences are redundant and sometimes it seems like you try too hard to be poetic and it becomes a little bit confusing
- when the mc looks over the cliff you should put "why can't i... remember anything?" basically switch the cant and i.
- change "why im here!?" to "why am i here!?" (at the cliff scene)
- "making my skin slips from his touch" doesnt really make sence to me
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Please, when The whole game comes out?, I played it for 3 hours straight I finished it, I need moree!!!! When you Will update It? 😭😭😭 I Need more game
Man this game is incredible!! The details, the style, the soundtracks.. everything is awesome!! You guys are doing very well!
I'm guessing that all the characters have different super powers maybe
idk but this feels like a HUGE danganropa scenario where we accepcted to take part in this experiment
were we are all forced to loose our memorys and wake up in a place where we have no memory of
I am in love with how this is going already, and I cannot wait to see more if the time comes!
Even if there are some errors; the writing is just wonderful! Yes, some words were used wrong, but that’s expected, especially when most people whose mother tongue is english make those same mistakes, if not more frequently. It’s absolutely incredible how everything is structured, give yourselves a pat in the back for this, truly.
I am more than happy to wait as long as it takes for an update on this visual novel, and hoping that any remaining struggles you are fighting soon vanish.
933 is the finest dude ever by the way thank you for creating such godsend… okay byebye
Are there any nsfw?
Are their names meaningful?I guess V for Vulpes and PT for Panthera tigris.But I don't know what's the meaning of OR AL LC.They don't exactly match their scientific names, so the pattern I'm looking for is probably incorrect.But I like the game. I'm just curious about the meaning of their names.
HOW DO YOU MAKE THIS HOLY FUCK THE ART THE STORY EVEN TH EFUCKN UI ITS TOO GOOD HOW
We are glad to know that you liked it. We know we’re ghosting a bit right now due to personal matters we need to resolve, but rest assured that we’re still working on this, so please be patient.
bruh, the waiting time is going to kill from the inside ;(
I don't know why but this VN really makes me want to wait for the sequel because frankly it's heavy from the start :)
This is the kind of VN in early development stage that, since there is only a few lore elements showed, i can't help but create hundreds and hundreds of various theories on how it all fits together.
I have never been so bored in my whole life. You can cut out 90% of what there is and not lose a thing from the story.... I've never been so bored. EVER
That can happen with a lot of visual novels lol 😅, it just depends on your attention span. The game is still in an introduction stage where we meet other characters so there is still plenty of time for the story of the game to unfold and get interesting. We just have to be patient and wait until we’re a couple of more builds in and then the potential of the games story becomes a lot more apparant to us :)
i found some grammar errors that you can fix in the beginning when the character says "but i do not do it." it would be better to say "but i don't." and when the thig on the top left pops up that says "you should avoid hurt your snout in the future" you should change it to "you should avoid hurting your snout in the future" and when the lion says "with this sudden situation we were suddenly put into" you should change it to "with this situation that we were suddenly put into" and at the very beginning when it says something about sand and gravel pressing in your back it would be better to say "Sand and gravel? they press into my back and stick to my skin like they want to pull me back into the ground" and a lot of other sentences are redundant and sometimes it seems like you try too hard to be poetic and it becomes a little bit confusing
- when the mc looks over the cliff you should put "why can't i... remember anything?" basically switch the cant and i.
- change "why im here!?" to "why am i here!?" (at the cliff scene)
- "making my skin slips from his touch" doesnt really make sence to me
BTW ill put more errors if i find anymore
Actually is the next update going to be the last one? Or its still far from and end
This is just the beginning. Once we have completed most of the sprites and backgrounds, the updates will be released at a faster pace.